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Dick S. explained it..
By:Lynne
Date: Tuesday, 20 February 2007, 12:18 am
In Response To: Tiger Eyes (Lynne)

Dick S. explained it in this thread:

http://www.owenfoundation.com/cgi-bin/av/arc01_browse.pl?review=3917

your verses are supposed to be:

5 syllables
7 syllables
5 syllables

5 syllables
7 syllables
5 syllables

(and repeat as many times as you want)

I don't think Dick would approve of the last verse.. but, hey.. I might still change it.  ;)

so.. anyone else? want to try? It's kind of fun...

Messages In This Thread

Tiger Eyes
Lynne -- Sunday, 18 February 2007, 11:59 pm
tiger eyes
Maddy -- Monday, 19 February 2007, 2:21 pm
yes, I did...
Lynne -- Monday, 19 February 2007, 4:24 pm
tiger eyes
Maddy -- Monday, 19 February 2007, 4:52 pm
Thanks, Maddy!
Lynne -- Monday, 19 February 2007, 5:19 pm
Year of the tiger here, too NM *N/M*
Maggie -- Tuesday, 20 February 2007, 6:26 am
dogs and cats
Maddy -- Tuesday, 20 February 2007, 2:28 pm
dogs and packs
Lynne -- Wednesday, 21 February 2007, 12:14 am
cats
Maggie -- Monday, 19 February 2007, 6:20 pm
Dick S. explained it..
Lynne -- Tuesday, 20 February 2007, 12:18 am
I forgot I did that
Dick S. -- Wednesday, 21 February 2007, 7:03 pm
so glad to see you, Dick
Lynne -- Wednesday, 21 February 2007, 7:19 pm
Green tea w Vit C
Iggy -- Wednesday, 21 February 2007, 8:12 pm
5-7-5-7-7 and all that
Dick S. -- Friday, 23 February 2007, 7:06 pm
thanks, Dick!
Lynne -- Friday, 23 February 2007, 7:15 pm
Lynne, this is beautiful!!!
Cheryl -- Tuesday, 20 February 2007, 9:58 pm
thank you!
Lynne -- Wednesday, 21 February 2007, 12:25 am