
Dick S. explained it in this thread:
http://www.owenfoundation.com/cgi-bin/av/arc01_browse.pl?review=3917
your verses are supposed to be:
5 syllables
7 syllables
5 syllables
(and repeat as many times as you want)
I don't think Dick would approve of the last verse.. but, hey.. I might still change it.
so.. anyone else? want to try? It's kind of fun...